[Nano novel] Chapter one: Taliesin's adventure. (not sure about that title yet)

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...i'm really not sure about Vox's text formatting sometimes - that paragraph with a larger font isn't supposed to have a larger font, lol.
[this is good]
oh Oh OH......he picked it up.....eeeeeeeek!!!!!!!!


I LOVED your description of the rainbow circle. It makes me want to run to the end of the next rainbow I see and do what he is doing.... I wanna be showered in the overlaying colors of the rainbow!!! I can totally relate to his need to find the end of the rainbow and what it may contain/look like/ mean/etc....


And you know what, I never noticed the larger font paragraph until I read your comment! Hahahahaha

Keep going lady....... this is off to a great (and suspenseful) start!!!

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